Cedric N'gaz is so much better this time around. The revision is definitely going to improve due to his increased character development. Along with his increased screen [?] time.
In other news that is also related to my revision, I have gotten to the disastrous point I referred to in the first version as "Chapter 4". Now it's at the end of chapter six, but that's okay. This version is so much better.
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i think that you've modified as a character as well. i'm interested to see how the people in my story change with a different scene. it makes me wonder if i'm going to be part of the main or side drama.
Of course I've modified. As far as character-changing experiences go, my senior year had quite a few, and the original was written as a junior. I can honestly say that I've studied people more in the last year than I've ever done before, and I'll flatter myself and say I have a great deal better perception than I used to. It helps me relate to my characters.
It almost makes me more confident about introducing myself to a new cast.
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