Officially, I'm going to take a crack at Kin of Kumei, sequel to Son of Sferesh. If all does not go well, and the plot line that does not yet exist in its entirety never solidifies, I can always abandon it and go back to the Son of Sferesh as a stand-alone plan.
As far as revision of Son of Sferesh goes, my mum finished reading it, and gave me quite a few criticisms that were very refreshing. I'm bouncing a few ideas around because of her. Endrea might not be so stupid now. She might have a brain. Heck, the rest of her family does; she must have picked something up. She can still be a cocky jerk, though.
Another friend finished it, and he hasn't given me any feedback yet, aside from his opinion on the projected sequel. I've plunged into working on it, but it's reminding me why I've always hated beginnings. Blegh. Pretty much all the torment that kept me from Son of Sferesh for so long...all over again. But still, I'm only thirteen pages in, and I can totally tell the difference between my viewpoint characters. That makes me happy. I didn't even try, but they're so easily discernable. Huzzah for things working out!
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i think that it would be good to do plot line while you diet on sferesh. and i want to read it.
I'll give it to you after I get it back from Puff. If I ever get it back from Puff. Knowing her, she'll finish and hand it off to someone else, then inform me of the transfer. But once I have it, you'll have it.
sweet.
I've heard of these books, are they part of a series of some sort?
I hope you've only heard of them on this blog and possibly on Terri's. The first book, Son of Sferesh, has been my Project from last September until July 23 this summer. Kin of Kumei may or may not turn out, but I believe that I can make SoS work as a stand-alone, so it's just a matter of time until I decide.
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